IS THEIR SOMETHING WRONG WITH THIS RESUME? CAUSE I SWEAR TO GOD I CAN’T GET A JOB!?


Jullien Miranda
No:. 281 260 0393
Houston Texas

WORK EXPERIENCE

2006 – 2009: Weatherford International Jar Technician / Lead
Responsibilities embody ripping down as good as convention jars to association standards whilst progressing great peculiarity as good as quantity. Responsible for contrast unwashed jars upon attainment from a field; removal jars, dissembling jars as good as tagging parts. Responsible for carrying out visible investigation of Jars as good as collection as good as behaving mag molecule inspection. Trained in progressing consistent application for any smirch in parts, noticing poor collection as good as stating any such commentary to emporium director or use manager. Responsible for steam cleaning as good as handle brushing all parts; environment hanging ornament springs; stuffing collection with oil; vigour contrast as good as convention Jars; contrast complete/assembled jars; portrayal jars as good as putting jars in stock. Responsible for progressing an orderly work area via a change as good as for replacing any palm collection to their scold locations at a finish of shift. Responsible for operation of still beyond derrick to lift, move, as good as upon all sides loads, such as machinery, equipment, products, as good as plain or bulk materials as good as collection regulating hoisting attachments.

2004 – 2006: Volume Millworks Welding Apprentice / Assistant
Trained in fusing or melting machines together with Tig (AC as good as DC) as good as Mig welder. Ability to coupling milled steel, aluminum as good as immaculate steel. Operated 4.5 as good as 7 in. point of view grinder, primer straight rope saw, pedestal grinder, primer logging appurtenance as good as assorted clamps as good as fixtures. Assisted TIG as good as MIG Welders in welding, brazing; as good as thermal as good as arc cutting. Cleaned work pieces to mislay impurities such as slag, decay as good as douse regulating handle brush, portable grinder, palm scraper and/or containing alkali solutions. Responsible for scrupulously joining hoses from palm flame to oxygen as good as fuel gas cylinders, as good as cables from energy source to electrode hilt as good as work-pieces or fixtures. Moved work pieces, collection as good as supplies, manually or byhandtruck. Lifted, moved, positioned, hold and/or clamped work pieces as good as components to table, jigs or alternative positions by regulating hoist, electric crane, jacks, shims, examine bars, wrenches, produce and/or wedges. Placed work pieces in to furnace to preheat for specified time. Operated gasoline engine to turn upon electric generators. Assembled as good as tack-welded steel frames as good as alternative member collection of appurtenance as good as apparatus in credentials for last welding. Measured as good as noted locations for steel components upon public table. Verified upon all sides of steel components in public regulating straightedge, multiple square, calipers, as good as ruler. Removed severe spots from castings with portable millstone as good as palm file. Removed, tagged as good as noted accomplished work. Attached grappling apparatus to objects in credentials of movement. Moved public to storage area regulating a gas or electric powered forklift.

2003 – 2004 Time Warner
Receiving Clerk / Order Filler
Using both a barcode-reading scanner as good as primer interpretation entrance upon computer, kept annals of all products received. Accepted deliveries, sorted packages as good as rebuilt profits for business or smoothness personnel. Noted time of incoming smoothness as good as condition of content/product. Transferred interpretation to suitable departments as good as changed / routed shop-worn products to a scold office.

2003 – 2004 Stewart & Stevenson
Shop Hand
Operated gas as good as electric forklifts to batch materials. Loaded ride vehicles. Kept jot down of every day operations. Kept work area clean. Other duties as requested.

EDUCATION

Certificate – Forklift Operator/Driver Trained as good as approved to drive/operate forklifts (including diesel, electric, gas or motor fuel powered trucks versed with flare attachments) in sequence to shift/stack bales, cartons, containers, crates as good as pallets of products in areas such as warehouses or docks; pierce tender materials as good as accomplished products to estimate or dispatch areas of factories; storing products in scold area of a warehouse; loading ride vehicles creation certain loads have been uniformly as good as firmly placed; servicing/making teenager adjustments to a forklift; gripping a jot down of every day operations. 2005

American CPR Training
Certificate – Safety Oriented First Aid as good as CPR Trained as good as approved to commend primary stages of plant unresponsiveness as good as to perform primary assessment, resuscitation as good as chest compressions (CPR), as good as to understanding with teenager emergencies such as cuts, abrasions, browns as good as hypothermia.

2006 Eisenhower High School Diploma – General Studies
General 12th class curriculum such as Social Studies (principles of Government, Democratic Ideal, Urbanization, Tax as good as Finance); Science (Physics, light & optics, relativity/force); Language Arts (English & universe literature, mass communication, air wave & television); Math (Calculus, Algebra, Probability as good as Statistics).

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  1. #1 by dargonsilver on January 23, 2010 - 10:01 am

    Too chatty and over-detailed in some ways, while still lacking pertinent information. If I were you, I would start afresh. Here’s what sections I would include if I were you and what to put in them:

    ~Contact Information: Name, Mailing Address, Home Phone (if you have one–I don’t), Cell Phone, Email Address, Website (if you have one– and only if it’s relevant, not Facebook or other such rubbish). Don’t abbreviate anything. Write out "Cell phone: xxx-xxx-xxxx" instead of just "No." I would bold your name and center it at the top in a slightly larger font. Don’t make it look like a Vegas neon sign though.

    ~Work Experience: Month and Year Started – Month and Year Ended, Job title, Workplace, Location of Workplace (City, State). You can follow it with a brief bullet-point list of no more than four or five shortly-worded items, so pick the most important things and ditch stuff like "keep work area clean" and "other duties as assigned." The person who will hire you KNOWS that all jobs have lots of duties, but it’s really a turn-off when someone writes twenty lines about a single job. Example: "Jan 2001 – Jan 2005. President of the United States of America, White House, Washington, D.C. Made policy decisions. Appointed and oversaw administrative committees. Head of executive branch of government." Nuff said, even for that job.

    ~Special Skills and Qualifications: Put your certifications in here. Same story. We know what CPR certification means, and even a lay-person has a good idea what "Forklift Operator" means. Instead, put when you earned each certification and when each will expire. (You might separate "First Aid" and "CPR" onto two different line items if they were earned separately.) Also put in any other equipment you can operate (even if it doesn’t require certification), special licenses (do you have a truck license by chance?), re-mention management experience, etc.

    ~Education: Again, just the basics, please. Graduation Date (Month and Year), School, City and State of School, any LARGE honors (Don’t say you were president of some random club. Your boss won’t care.). No hiring manager is going to be interested in reading that list of your high school courses, either. They just need to know you graduated.

    ~Other Work Experiences: Volunteer work of ANY kind, as long as you’ve done it more than just a few times (coach, youth leader at a church, soup kitchen, animal shelter, whatever). It shows that you’re a productive person and are involved in the community. If you’re not doing volunteer work, you SHOULD be while job-hunting. Most people find jobs largely through networking, and volunteering is a FREE way to mingle with other people.

    ~References: Yes, you put them on your resume as well, even though a majority of applications ask you to write the references on that page. Put in 3-5. First, make sure the people you’ve chosen will say nice things about you. If you’re not sure, pick another person. Second, make sure the references you’ve chosen are okay with being your references. Third, let them know every time you send a batch of resumes out so they can be prepared for possible phone calls. Who to pick: No family members. Preferably ONLY people you have worked with (so they can talk about your work ethic/skills AND your character rather than just your character). Preferably at least one manager/boss. Include on your resume: Name, Position, Workplace, and Location ("Shift Manager, Such and Such Industries, Sometown, Wyoming"), and as much contact information as your reference gives you permission to include. Whatever the reference wishes.

    ~(optional): I put a colored dividing line between all the sections on mine to make it a little more visually interesting as well as more cleanly organized. I also print it on heavy-weight marbled paper. I also include three copies of reference letters that I ask bosses, professors, and/or coworkers to write for me. Even though the letters usually aren’t REQUIRED, who’s going to throw them away? And it makes me stand out above all the other applicants.

    ~Final Tip: You can move the sections around in a way that seems to make the most sense to YOU. Put the section that seems most important first, and so on. I actually COMPLETELY rewrite my resume depending on the specific type of job I’m applying for, customizing it to match the priorities position I want.

    Good luck hunting.

  2. #2 by Ms.J on January 23, 2010 - 10:01 am

    my bf is also a welder and he is having a hard time finding work because of the economy…
    also are there welding jobs readily available in your area?

    but by looking at your resume it is tooo wordy, and it doesn’t give that dates of when You accomplished these things…and u don’t have to go into detail about what studies u took in high school…try to explain things in just a few sentences employeers only glance at a resume most times…

    if u are in college, you can have someone look over your resume, do u send a coverletter also?

  3. #3 by rwa000 on January 23, 2010 - 10:01 am

    first of all your resume looks like it Was copied straight out of a job service office, use the word responsibilities or responsible once, not multiple times, list achievements as much as duties, because the way I read it you are a semi skilled worker, if you welded than you must have some certs or xrays to show a potential employer, your last position is not much of anything ,factory work, certified fort truck operator is enough, high school diploma is all you need to put down.
    Your resume needs a solid skill level of some kind, you may have more talent than your resume shows but in it’s current state I wouldn’t give it a second look unless I was looking for a fork lift operator

  4. #4 by jobbend on January 23, 2010 - 10:01 am

    You are hiding your accomplishments and skills in paragraphs. Consider using bullet points to highlight your core skills and accomplishments, and not using sentences. Recruiters read resumes like this:

    What companies you worked for and dates
    Your job title
    Your skills – top 3 bullets are most read

    If this makes sense to them, they will then read more in depth. You need to make it as easy for them to understand what you are trying to achieve.

    If you struggle with this, consider having a professional resume writer take a stab at it, or sometimes state unemployment offices have people who can help.

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